An Outstanding Video!!
It is clear that you have put a lot of work into the video and I think it is paying off. With 843 views in just 2 weeks, it is quite popular.
Here are some ideas about how it could be even better:
Your description at the beginning "Men are pedophiles ..." is misleading and does not do credit to your video which you spent so much time making.
What you wrote as a message, should be the description for the video:
"The video is to show that the media, and society as a whole sees a male having sex with a 15 year old as rape or pedophilia. But when a woman has sex with a 15 year old, it is called cute things like "an affair". Furthermore, women tend to not even get "into trouble" for their "indiscretions". A pedophile is a pedophile, regardless of the gender and they should be treated equally in the eyes of the law."
You should edit your video description.
2, The video moves too fast to read it. Especially the text that you stamp "Lies" or "Truth" on. There isn't enough time to read the text. I know that viewers could keep stopping the video, but that is tedious. IMHO the 10 minute video should be two 7 or 8 minute videos, so that people would have the time to read more of the text.
It is a great video, so I am excited about it being even better. The description change would be a really good idea.
Did you see my video "Feminists Disrupt a Forum..."? I am calling myself "Proudguy" at YouTube.
What software did you use to make the video? I want to make a big video like yours, so I'm looking for cheap software to use. Thanks if you can help.
- Proudguy (aka PaulGuelph)